Monday, 17 February 2025

This week's proto-poems

 Excerpts from some poetry prompts. The first one is based on a story my papa told about his brief time in Japanese-controlled Cambodia at the end of the war.

First prompt: something dangerous passed down

We mustn't speak of this sharp-edged symbol of war,

but in whispers.

There was a tale he saw a man's head cut off, 

was it this sword?

Second prompt: a time when you were dangerous

I've never been dangerous in my life,

probably because I've never been in danger;

been surrounded by softness,



Friday, 14 February 2025

Two more proto-poems

 Another useful early morning session with Marjorie Lotfi's Substack writing group.

First prompt: describe yourself using things that you love (Ways to Love Myself)

the sound of a flock of birds taking off from the sand;

a flick of pages from a book 


Second prompt: losing yourself 

And I lost myself, somewhere in the ebb and flow of the world.

Thursday, 6 February 2025

Two proto-poems

So I joined a writing group on Substack, run by the lovely Marjorie Lotfi. I'd attended a writing retreat she offered, last autumn. It's a half hour zoom call, with poetry readings and quick prompts for inspiration. I found the similar (longer) workshops that we'd done on the retreat helpful so I thought I'd make the effort to keep my poetry writing going.

I think of these like sketches. It's helpful to have a body of work that I can dip into and play with, rather than starting from scratch. 

First prompt: a place that mattered (to you)

Spitting apple pips into the void.

Something takes root.

Second prompt: talking because someone is listening 

Thoughts spilling out of me

all tumbled together

like when we broke the dam

that we had built at the beach